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By: Angeleque Ford » Excerpt Monday – Sweet Sin

Angeleque Ford » Excerpt Monday – Sweet Sin — Fri, 18 Jun 2010 23:36:12 +0000

[...] Ford, Womens Fiction (PG13) Kaige, Historical Romance (PG13) Jeannie Lin, Contemporary (PG13) RF Long, Fantasy Sword and Sorcery (PG13) Shawntelle Madison, Paranormal Romance (PG13) Debbie Mumford, [...]

By: Kaige

Kaige — Thu, 17 Dec 2009 18:03:45 +0000

Thanks for sharing this with Excerpt Monday as well as running it as a serial! Looking forward to reading the rest.

By: Hailey Edwards

Hailey Edwards — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 22:41:56 +0000

So much emotion here. I look forward to seeing how this ends. Luckily, I’m a week behind and you have another installment at the ready.

By: Ella Drake

Ella Drake — Wed, 16 Dec 2009 12:54:13 +0000

I love this story. I’m so glad you’re posting it as a serial.

By: Moonsanity

Moonsanity — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 21:23:24 +0000

I was glued to the words, even with kids talking to me! That’s a sign of good writing:) I can’t wait for more. Thanks for sharing it!

By: Shawntelle Madison

Shawntelle Madison — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 14:52:45 +0000

Loved this! You have a great voice that brought me into the time period.

By: Crista

Crista — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 19:43:46 +0000

Awesome opening! I can’t wait to read the rest. Tyria sounds like my kind of heroine — strong, independant, resourceful, but with a definite soft spot.

By: KB Alan

KB Alan — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 15:57:45 +0000

Great start, I’m looking forward to the rest!

By: Jeanette Murray

Jeanette Murray — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 15:38:09 +0000

Love this: “The hand she would have laid on his shoulder hung cold and stubborn by her side. She had not been made for comfort.”

Great work!