Comments on: Excerpt Monday – from May Queen by R. F. Long http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/ where fantasy and romance meet Wed, 08 Feb 2012 17:18:18 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Excerpt Monday | Julia Knight http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-1575 Excerpt Monday | Julia Knight Fri, 22 Jul 2011 16:38:18 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-1575 [...] (PG13) Adelle Laudan, Contemporary Romance (PG 13) Jeannie Lin, Historical Romance (PG 13) RF Long, YA Paranormal (PG13) Caitlynn Lowe, Epic Fantasy (PG13) Shawntelle Madison, Paranormal Romance (PG [...] [...] (PG13) Adelle Laudan, Contemporary Romance (PG 13) Jeannie Lin, Historical Romance (PG 13) RF Long, YA Paranormal (PG13) Caitlynn Lowe, Epic Fantasy (PG13) Shawntelle Madison, Paranormal Romance (PG [...]

]]> By: Kaige http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-249 Kaige Thu, 13 Aug 2009 05:43:32 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-249 Definitely sucked me in! Awesome job, and you're so humble about it not being professionally edited. Very nice! Definitely sucked me in! Awesome job, and you’re so humble about it not being professionally edited. Very nice!

]]> By: Alexia Reed http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-248 Alexia Reed Wed, 12 Aug 2009 01:05:04 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-248 Great excerpt! I loved how you did the description of her seeing the old witch in the mirror... awesome! Great excerpt! I loved how you did the description of her seeing the old witch in the mirror… awesome!

]]> By: Bethanne http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-242 Bethanne Mon, 10 Aug 2009 21:15:30 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-242 <i>“A mortal girl is loose in our forest. Whosoever brings me her heart to place in this casket will be rewarded. Beyond measure. Now leave me.”</i> Just love that! Great excerpt. “A mortal girl is loose in our forest. Whosoever brings me her heart to place in this casket will be rewarded. Beyond measure. Now leave me.”

Just love that! Great excerpt.

]]> By: Caitlynn http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-240 Caitlynn Mon, 10 Aug 2009 19:44:37 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-240 Ooh...very eerie and intriguing... Ooh…very eerie and intriguing…

]]> By: Cate Hart http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-239 Cate Hart Mon, 10 Aug 2009 17:55:45 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-239 WOW, and this is unedited!! This has a great premise. I love it, I want to read more.I love faerie stories, but even more when they use the fearies from a Midsummer Night's Dream! WOW, and this is unedited!! This has a great premise. I love it, I want to read more.I love faerie stories, but even more when they use the fearies from a Midsummer Night’s Dream!

]]> By: evie byrne http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-237 evie byrne Mon, 10 Aug 2009 16:59:11 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-237 Very nice. I'm already sympathetic toward Titania. She looks to be a potent antagonist. Very nice. I’m already sympathetic toward Titania. She looks to be a potent antagonist.

]]> By: Jeannie Lin http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-236 Jeannie Lin Mon, 10 Aug 2009 15:34:25 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-236 I just love your visuals with reflection watching her *shudders*. This story both fascinates me and sends chills down my spine. May Queen makes me think of Guillermo Del Toro's "Pan's Labyrinth". I just love your visuals with reflection watching her *shudders*. This story both fascinates me and sends chills down my spine. May Queen makes me think of Guillermo Del Toro’s “Pan’s Labyrinth”.

]]> By: Shawntelle http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-233 Shawntelle Mon, 10 Aug 2009 13:31:32 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-233 I really enjoyed this... The Queen is interesting! I really enjoyed this… The Queen is interesting!

]]> By: K.L. Townsend http://www.rflong.com/2009/08/10/excerpt-monday-from-may-queen-by-r-f-long/comment-page-1/#comment-231 K.L. Townsend Mon, 10 Aug 2009 12:50:02 +0000 http://www.rflong.com/?p=508#comment-231 I thought this was very well done. Nice excerpt to draw a person into the tale. I enjoyed the imagery with the mirror. I thought this was very well done. Nice excerpt to draw a person into the tale. I enjoyed the imagery with the mirror.

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